Score: 10

"Impressive"

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 23, 2009

Impressive! though I must agree with smokinjoeevil, Bitey wasn't the only one before with intelligence/emotions. That kind of put a bit of a kink in the narration, so perhaps look back on your past works, or are you trying to reimagine biteys world a little? EXCELLENT art and sound either way, you are always perfect there.

I would suggest having no narration unless ABSOLUTELY necessary, and if there are any human characters, have them talk, not including bitey since he really isn't human, unless of course someone teaches him some form of language.

Again I agree with smokinjoeevil on the feeling of discontinuity, it seems odd to see intelligent humanoid creatures in the past works then say they don't exist

Score: 10

"nice"

submission: The Last Gift

date: December 9, 2009

I could almost tell right at the end what was going to happen. very nice. and to all the whiners out there, Christmas is a cover up holiday, Jesus was never born on the 25th or any other day. It was originally the Winter Solstice, a Druid festival. The christians created Christmas to cover it up and assimilate some of the religion int their own. Stop whining already and judging the author based on your beliefs from an opressive and destructive religion. The animation was top notch, the voices could have been a slight bit louder. Though I think the joke could have been a bit more explosive or sharp witted... or longer farting of food stuffs at least! heh.

Score: 10

"Amazing"

submission: Microcosm

date: December 2, 2009

This is one of the best flash works I've seen on newgrounds. A great message with a funny twist ending. Though I wish it had been just a tiny bit longer at the start with him fooling around more getting to work. Either way excellent and entirely original even though it borrowed an idea from The Matrix, I've seen similar ideas before and after The Matrix, so! anyway! I can't wait to see more work from you :)

Score: 10

"Excellent"

submission: Fooling Around Blues[Complete]

date: December 23, 2009

Why this is only 3.90 at the moment I dont know, this is excellent! Jonathan has great vocals and the band sounds great, wonderful blues, no freakin criticism here!

Score: 10

"Very good!"

submission: [S] Silent Hill

date: December 15, 2009

Evil, menacing, slightly agressive, almost as if to say "what are you doing here snooping around?" I like the beat, and the vocalish sounds. This would be perfect in Silent Hill, perhaps near the start of a game.

Score: 10

"whoa"

submission: Alert of anger!

date: December 3, 2009

Ok the start made me think of something eerie from Silent Hill.. damn... very nice, though I dont like the high tone ringing bells at some spots... kinda draws away from it.