Score: 10

"Impressive"

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 23, 2009

Impressive! though I must agree with smokinjoeevil, Bitey wasn't the only one before with intelligence/emotions. That kind of put a bit of a kink in the narration, so perhaps look back on your past works, or are you trying to reimagine biteys world a little? EXCELLENT art and sound either way, you are always perfect there.

I would suggest having no narration unless ABSOLUTELY necessary, and if there are any human characters, have them talk, not including bitey since he really isn't human, unless of course someone teaches him some form of language.

Again I agree with smokinjoeevil on the feeling of discontinuity, it seems odd to see intelligent humanoid creatures in the past works then say they don't exist

Score: 10

"nice"

submission: The Last Gift

date: December 9, 2009

I could almost tell right at the end what was going to happen. very nice. and to all the whiners out there, Christmas is a cover up holiday, Jesus was never born on the 25th or any other day. It was originally the Winter Solstice, a Druid festival. The christians created Christmas to cover it up and assimilate some of the religion int their own. Stop whining already and judging the author based on your beliefs from an opressive and destructive religion. The animation was top notch, the voices could have been a slight bit louder. Though I think the joke could have been a bit more explosive or sharp witted... or longer farting of food stuffs at least! heh.

Score: 10

"Amazing"

submission: Microcosm

date: December 2, 2009

This is one of the best flash works I've seen on newgrounds. A great message with a funny twist ending. Though I wish it had been just a tiny bit longer at the start with him fooling around more getting to work. Either way excellent and entirely original even though it borrowed an idea from The Matrix, I've seen similar ideas before and after The Matrix, so! anyway! I can't wait to see more work from you :)

Score: 5

"nice"

submission: Pheonix: Wrong this down.

date: October 18, 2009

nice, very nice, good comedy, but put in a preloader!!!

Score: 0

"Oh come on"

submission: Beautiful rainy girl

date: September 20, 2009

you can do better, and screw your reasoning for not doing sound, what "project"?put sound in it! And the animation itself is really just, choppy, angular, poor in general. I know you say this is your third but that's no excuse, take the time to get a better program, or find out how to get the best out of the program you have. work on real animation, the mouth at the end was horrible. you can keep the animation shapes and such, but add more real animation, practice practice, and look around on newgrounds for animation tutorials, also look on the net, everywhere. and a minor but still annoying note, work on your english, that definitely matters if there is no sound!

Score: 5

"confusion"

submission: Zelda Dark Sorcerers 6p2

date: July 15, 2009

too many Links, who's the angry blue link supposed to be? the animation actually seemed a slight step back from where it was. So did the audio. You really should look in on updating your audio/visual programs. Also check out "Unleash Your Imagination" by Spike Valentine here on newgrounds, it might give you some help or ideas.

Score: 10

"Very nice"

submission: Cheer Up Emo Kid: Perfect

date: June 11, 2009

Very nice, good animation, smooth and an ending that was actually surprising (though I knew SOMETHING was going to happen) I loved the timing of everything and the girly emo scream, which is so typical of emos.

Score: 4

"it didn't make much sense"

submission: Chess Tale

date: May 2, 2009

it didn't make much sense, I liked the music, and the animation, but the two didn't go together I think, and the plot was really vague, and didn't exactly go anywhere. good try though

Score: 7

"This is good but needs some sound effects"

submission: Mario's Suicide Struggle

date: April 20, 2009

my title says it all, this just needs sound effects man! the music is great though! funny jokes

Score: 7

"good story line"

submission: Zelda Dark Sorcerers 4p1

date: April 18, 2009

good story line, graphics are a little flat, work on arm and leg joints a bit, oh and I'm a little confused on the blue link with the big blue sword, who's he?